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August 9, 2007
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OMFG, I hate 2nd person, but if somebody wants to write it, good luck. I basically mentioned it to be fair.
Well, for first person, it's all about the character and being able to communicate their change. Third person tends to be kind of distanced from the story, while first person is deeply connected to the story. You have to be able to tell the story from the point of view of the person you're writing. If you can't do that, you can't enjoy writing it.
I mean, I'm not entirely sure what to give tips on. <<;
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PLACE OF SEXY WEBCOMIC. >8D
"I still believe that change can happen, though it's hard and it happens slowly."
Agreed on the second person thing though. It does suck.
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"Boys and Girls, do not go with Sora on random adventures. You will get lost, and die." [link]
BADDASS--> *Jubilations <--BADDASS
<3 DEITOBI OTP FTW! <3
Second person is "You are, you do, you go", in instead of "They are, they do, they go" for Third person or "I am, I do, I go" for first. There's only two places I've ever seen Second person used are in self insert fanfics (which 99.99999% of the time are crap) or Erotica.
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93.347% of deviants don't know that there are three kinds of lies:
lies, damn lies, and statistics.
Ba dum tish. <3
You're officially on my list of favorite people for writing this, dearie.
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93.347% of deviants don't know that there are three kinds of lies:
lies, damn lies, and statistics.
Ba dum tish. <3
(thank you by the way. It was MUCH help.
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"Boys and Girls, do not go with Sora on random adventures. You will get lost, and die." [link]
BADDASS--> *Jubilations <--BADDASS
<3 DEITOBI OTP FTW! <3
You're welcome.
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93.347% of deviants don't know that there are three kinds of lies:
lies, damn lies, and statistics.
Ba dum tish. <3
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"Boys and Girls, do not go with Sora on random adventures. You will get lost, and die." [link]
BADDASS--> *Jubilations <--BADDASS
<3 DEITOBI OTP FTW! <3
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