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Part 2~! Hope this helps even more.
If you have any questions or additional topics you want me to cover, just ask. :nod:

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:iconkindernacht:
First person, I've found, actually isn't that much more interesting. I personally in my writings go more for a third person omniscient because it lets me show more than one character's thoughts, and I don't end up with anything too centered around a singular character. In the past, I've written up first, second, and third person stories, and third was definitely easiest for me. Where I could write a 50,000 word story in third person, first person brought me to a screeching halt only freshly into the story. Second person... we won't even get into that one. Got tips on 1st and 2nd?

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:iconavaunt:
Well, I write first person when doing a comic, third person when writing something else. First person can be a lot more fun for me, I've found, but I think it really just depends on the person.
OMFG, I hate 2nd person, but if somebody wants to write it, good luck. I basically mentioned it to be fair.

Well, for first person, it's all about the character and being able to communicate their change. Third person tends to be kind of distanced from the story, while first person is deeply connected to the story. You have to be able to tell the story from the point of view of the person you're writing. If you can't do that, you can't enjoy writing it.
I mean, I'm not entirely sure what to give tips on. <<;

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:iconkindernacht:
Ahaha, well, I can write from the point of view of the person who's narrating, I don't have that much trouble with that, but it just doesn't go too terribly well with my style of writing and tends to get boring rather quickly. But like I said, third person omniscient. I can still use all my greatly loved third person things, but I can also get into what characters are thinking.

Agreed on the second person thing though. It does suck.

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:iconminacoleta:
I was wondering. I know what 1st and 3rd person is, but what is 2nd person?

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:iconpoptarts-at-2am:
Oh, oh, I know this one! =D

Second person is "You are, you do, you go", in instead of "They are, they do, they go" for Third person or "I am, I do, I go" for first. There's only two places I've ever seen Second person used are in self insert fanfics (which 99.99999% of the time are crap) or Erotica.

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*fav's*

You're officially on my list of favorite people for writing this, dearie.

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:iconminacoleta:
Erotica?

(thank you by the way. It was MUCH help. :D)

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:iconpoptarts-at-2am:
It's a genre. Think porn, but in softcover book form. (I learned this from an HBO Documentary, I swear.)

You're welcome.

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93.347% of deviants don't know that there are three kinds of lies:
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:iconminacoleta:
ok... well... thats something I didn't need to know... XDD

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BADDASS--> *Jubilations <--BADDASS

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